I have mixed feelings about this book. Although it is well written, I had problems with the plot and the flow of the story. That’s not to say that I did not enjoy it, it;s just that I wanted more – plus the story just ended before it even started!. Sarah’s Surrender is an e-novella that follows right after the second book Bound by Bliss and centers on the jilted fiance, Sarah Swilp.
THE MAIN CHARACTERS
Sarah is in a bind. She is already bound for spinsterhood and her family has money problems and she has to marry fast. Recently jilted, she is now forced to accept a proposal from her father’s partner who is about her father’s age. Of course, she hides scars deep within herself and is mostly a wallflower. Now, what I didn’t like about Sarah is that she is just too timid. Sure, she actually grew some balls and demanded what she wanted but I still thought that she was too timid. Well, the reason for her behavior could be explained by being hurt by her OTL Jonathan five years ago.
Jonathan Perry, Sarah’s OTL, left her five years ago and swore never to marry her at all. Now, I really had problems with him as the hero. I know that he had his reasons but I thought what he did to Sarah was just too callous and underhanded and did not have any basis at all (IMHO, anyway). So he returns to London and is surprised to see his love (so he says) Sarah to be a totally different woman. I also had problems with the way he dealt with Sarah and I still believe that in the end, he didn’t really love her at all.
This book is a novella and it really read like one. At less than 100 pages, it was a very, very quick read for me. To be honest, I had difficulty getting into the story at all. I think the plot suffered a lot because of the shortness of the story. The characters weren’t well developed – heck, their love wasn’t well developed at all. In fact, I still think that the two main characters weren’t really in love with each other but they were in lust. The story basically happens within 3 days (with only 2 nights being the sole focus of the plot). There were a lot of scorching sexy-times but I think it didn’t help the plot other than cementing the fact that Sarah and Jonathan were in lust with each other.
This novella had potential, I thought. If only the characters were well fleshed out, and most importantly, the romance was done really well, I would have enjoyed this novella. I have read all the books in this series, including the novellas and I think this one was the worst of all.
You may want to read the first two books in the series: Mastering the Marquess & Bound by Bliss. The novella Revealing Ruby can also give you a short teaser for the next full-length book in the series: Ravishing Ruby.
If you’re like me who enjoy historical romances with a loot of scorching sexy-times, read books by Jess Michaels. If you haven’t read her before, I suggest starting with Taken by the Duke (Pleasure Wars #1).
There truly was nothing exciting about her at all.
A small sigh escaped her lips despite her best intentions.
When she’d been younger, when Jonathan had known her, people had complimented the flash of her eyes and the brightness of her smile, but it had been five years since she’d heard such words.
She was so average as to be strange.
She glanced down. Except for her dress. There was nothing average about her dress.
If described as the bright green of spring it sounded as if it should be pretty and refreshing, but its harsh gleam was anything but. At least on her. On the cousin it had been designed for, it would have been quite striking. Claudia’s white skin, black hair, and brilliant blue eyes would have stood up to the vibrant color. On Sarah it just looked . . . well, she imagined that half of the people who glanced her way saw only the dress and not her at all.
She’d overheard many more comments about her disastrous clothes these last years than she’d heard comments about herself. Even Lady Perse had commented, had made it clear that she could do nothing to help Sarah find a husband if Sarah would not help herself, and finding a new dressmaker had been first on the list. Only she couldn’t afford a single new dress, much less a new wardrobe. Her family’s finances were a private matter, however, and Papa would have been more than a little displeased if she’d discussed such a thing with Lady Perse, and so she’d refused the second invitation to a matrimonial tea. She’d focused all her attention on Lord Duldon, the only eligible man in years to ask her to dance—and now he was marrying Lady Bliss.
There was nothing for it; she would have to marry Mr. Meyers.
Blast. She was moping, feeling sorry for herself.
Tears welled behind her eyes as feelings of misery filled her.
Splashing her cheeks again, she bit down on her lips trying to bring some color to them. Turning away, she did not risk focusing on the mirror for even a second. It was far better to imagine the improvement to her appearance than to be faced with the truth. At least she was sure that the devastation she felt inside did not show. That was one thing she had learned from her papa and his actions, how to quickly cover any emotions that might try to rise to the surface. Placid and calm. That was what she would be.
And if some people took that to mean she was standoffish, that was just fine with her.
Sweeping out of the retiring room, she pretended that she was somebody other than herself, pretended that she was a great queen, the head of a conquering army: chin tilted up, shoulders straight, face cold and clear. She feared nothing, cared for nothing. She was supreme.
And then she reached the head of the stairs and saw them, her past, her present—and her future.
Jonathan, looking up at her with what she could only assume was distaste.
Lord Duldon, gazing at Lady Bliss as if he gazed upon paradise itself.
And Mr. Meyers, staring off into the crowd as if he had someplace far better to be.
They stood spread across the floor below, a display of all her foolishness, of all her dreams.
She pulled a long breath in, felt her breasts press tight against the horrible lace edging of the gown.
And then, ignoring the other two men, she forced her gaze to move to Mr. Meyers. He was her future. He might not know it yet, but she’d let him know this evening. She could only hope that he still wished to marry her.
A swallow caught halfway down her throat.
Mr. Meyers was not tall. His shoulders were not vast and broad. He smelled of sweat and must, not leather. He’d never made her laugh, not in all the years he’d been visiting her father. When he looked at her his eyes rarely looked higher than her breasts and on occasion her lips.
And he was old enough to be her father.
But, he had asked her to marry him.
And the second time it had felt more of a threat than a question.
But then, he knew about Papa. Knew about the debts. Knew just how little choice she had.
She should have said yes to him that last time, only a week ago, when he’d called on her before lunch and actually bothered to bring her flowers. He’d tossed them at her after her refusal.
His words still echoed in her brain.
But she could no longer afford to have dreams; her time had run out. Any pride she had left was gone.